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What readers have said about the stories...

 

 

Blurring  The  Lines

 

All Souls Pass

God, I am loving this entertaining ficcie to pieces. You're characters are very complex and easy to fall in love with; the plot has pretty much everything I look for in a fic. Action, psychology, angst, mystery, and wondrous smut make for an engrossing read.

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this world and these people you've created are so fully realized that i found myself completely engrossed. the detail, the background/history, the emotional growth of two quite self-protective characters is all very well done.

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outstanding lemon, just freaking outstanding

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Fluff and romance and danger and angst all rolled into one!

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It was as if I lived in the world they lived in, it was as if I was right beside them when all this happened. Beautiful! Truly a masterpiece!

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Really, the best word for this is a simple WOW.

i love leather even more than i did before. your desciption made me want to cry.

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No matter what you write, it always seems to turn out good! And some M/M/M, huh? *___* Even better. Eeee, I'm too excited over this!

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i just adore your style and your ideas!!!

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I know it will be just as good as (if not better than...) all of your previous fics

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Goodness! You sure know how to make a girl drool

 

What The Wind Carries
The Lies We Tell

This is a very moving, eventful story... It was wonderful!

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great work! well written, love the idea... soooo sweat!

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I like that your protagonist isn't your typical, garden variety hero. He's bitter, caustic and ironically misanthropic--considering his profession--but it just makes it more impressive when he does something heroic

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once again i am surprised at the twist and turmoil you place your characters in... and its only the first three chapters!

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One of the best and most original ones I've come across in a long time. The descriptions are superb.

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I've already read it but I couldn't help but do it again. I laughed I was near tears, and right now am lost for words

 

 

that was the best beginning chapter of ANY story I've ever read!

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I gulped this whole thing down. It's incredible. Well written. You've managed to make me suspend my disbelief and you are GREAT with characterization.

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what can I say? it's great... I love it!!!

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This is a wonderful story, I like how you twist our expectations.

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holy crap that was good. i'm breathless :) thank you, i'm going to try to go to sleep now...yeah right, not with those pictures in my head. wow. wow. really, wow. heh. cigarette?

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ok, this was the BEST story i have ever read! it just totally rocked!!!!! it had me on the edge of the seat all the way to the end! i wouldn't stop reading it! your characters are so......so.... (can't think of right word).... captivating!

 

 

Heroes And Ghosts
Short Works & PWP's

This is sooooooo good!! What a creative story line!!!

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You've really outdone yourself with this one!

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that is just so sweet, i'm doing the fangirl 'awww' in a big way :) love this story.

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swear each fic you write catches the attention in completely new ways... ^_^ Smashing job twining sci and fi together, and as always your characters are addictive; perfectly fleshed out tidbits delivered with nice sublety

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This is by far the best fic I've ever read and I'm being serious here. You've really nailed everything with this story with the world it's set in, the characters and not to mention the originality of the plotline!

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Awesome.
Awesomeawesomeawesome. :D
I really loved this one, you did an amazing job as always. In every story each character seems to be someone you could know, and I think that's just amazing.

I loved this little collection

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The words are so hypnotic and they pull a reader such as myself deeper into the plot, drooling with anticipation!

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That was the hottest, sexiest, sweetest story I have ever read where those three adjectives can be used interchangably, lol! Very, very, very well done

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Oh man, oh mama, I am in love again. this universe is Just Genius

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Again, wonderful plot (fuck, where do you get your ideas from?!), intruiging atmosphere... and subtle, unique characters.

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Wow! That was an amazing read, the plot was soooo intriguing but i guess thats what you're all about if you're other fics are anything to go by!

     
     
     
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Blurring the Lines 'verse by S. A. Payne
What the Wind Carries by S. A. Payne
The Lies We Tell by S. A. Payne
Heroes & Ghosts 'verse by S. A. Payne
All Souls Pass 'verse by S. A. Payne
Visions & Shadows by S. A. Payne
A Springtime Duel 'verse by S. A. Payne
Snowflakes & Embers by S. A. Payne
Is Yet 'verse by S. A. Payne
Remittance by S. A. Payne
Under A Sky So Blue by S. A. Payne
40 Shots of Whiskey by S. A. Payne
New Again by S. A. Payne
Short Stories by S. A. Payne